The virtual reality was very real, the grand canyon was amazing, the words that the person said in the trailer were very convincing, and the fall were awesome, the natural space is so cool.
The devils pool doesn't look that much "dare-deviling". But the views were very cool, and they were very beautiful and COOL.
I really liked how you used words such as "Cool and beautiful."
ReplyDeleteYou should work on describing more what you saw.
Good Job!